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Poem - Whistling thru… - Kalai Selvi - 5.0 out of 5 based on 2 votes

Poem - Whistling thru… - Kalai Selvi

whistling

Air around me vibrate

Carrying along with it

The force of love

Blown through your whistle.

Again and again love sacs

Expand thin walls of lungs

Breathing in and out

Thin love particles

Traveling along

Heavily blown whistle.

They vibrate on ear lobes

Literally whispering the name of love.

Virtually taking

The shape of love heart

The sound of whistle

Blown again and again

Brightens the evening sky.

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# RE: Poem - Whistling thru… - Kalai SelviAdharvJo 2019-02-09 21:07
:clap: :clap: wow lovely lines ma'am (y) thank you.
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# Poem: whistling thru by Kalai SelviGuru K 2019-02-09 20:11
Well written.
You score on the imagination part.
My best wishes.
Have a nice day

Cheers
Guru
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# RE: Poem - Whistling thru… - Kalai SelviRaVai 2019-02-09 07:09
Dear Kalai Selvi!
Super!
But one thing! Your name is in chaste Tamil, while your poem in English is par excellence!
Keep writing!
Congrats
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