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போட்டி பிரிவு - சூழ்நிலை கதை - கதையை தொடக்கத்தில் இருந்து தொடர்க...
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ன் கடைமை முடிந்தது என்று நில்லாமல் தினமும் அவளுக்கு மொபைலில் அழைத்து பேசுவான். எப்படியாவது அவளை பழைய நிலைக்கு கொண்டு வர போராடி வருகிறான் இரண்டு வருடமாக. ஆனால் பாரதியின் நிலையில் எந்த மாற்றமும் இல்லை. அவள் எந்த மாற்றத்துக்கும் ஒத்துழைக்கவில்லை.
kathai nadai nalla irundhathu......
expecting more stories from you......
Very well narrated ..
Family, household chores matra velaigal, issues etc etc-nu elathaiyum parallel track-la vachutu site-kaga nanga spend seira ovvoryu second-m fulfill ana oru nalla feel
Dhayalan pola niraiya perai uruvakuvathu nammai pondravargal kaiyil than iruku. Athe neram Barathi-ku nadantah kodumaiyai thadupathum naama pasangalai valarkum vithathil than iruku.
Ithu pondra samabavangal epothu than nirkumnu teriyalai
Innum niraiya kathaigal ezhutha my hearty wishes :)
Arumaiyana kathai karu. Nama enga irunthalum vizhippunavoda irukanum. Apadi iruntha sila vibareethangal nadakkuratha thavirkalam. Thaya char super. Ellarukum ipadi purinthunarvoda oru Hus kidaikka koduththu vachirukanum. Nalla yezhuthirukinga. Keep writing
very strong message tat u have conveyed
It is always in a girl's hand to protect herself.. She is supposed to stay vigilant how ever the situtation(for eg in ur story Barathi was tired) may be..
From my perception I feel like the mistake is on Barathi.. She cant be careless.. When people fail to notice whats happening in their surroundings sometimes it might put them in trouble
Thank you so much mam for this wonderful story
Its actually like a reminder for us to stay alert so that we could ignore such circumstances
btw very well narrated and Dayalan's character was catchy
Best of luck for u to write more mam
you are 100% correct. Pengal eppavum vizhippodu irukkanum. i think antha vizhippunarvu village side innum full a varalai. oru village girl city kku varrappa, avangalala udane adopt aaga mudiyala. yaraiyum santhega kannoda parkka innum pazhakanumnu ninaikkiren. in case ithu mathiri ethavathu nadanthittalum, they have to face their life. Dayalan mathiri niraya per mun varanum.
thanks again for your comments
Bharathi couldn't fight since she is not having that much awareness of girls safety and she didn't observe the driver's eyes. i think athai innum konjan explain panniyirukkalam :)
thanks for pointing that..
lifela evlo kastam vanthalum yethu poratanum alaga sollitinga super
in real life if people are like him ,there would not be any suicide
nice one
firs tattempt best attempt
Bharathi mathiri ethanaiyo pengal bathikkapaduranga.. appadi bathikkapatta ella pengalukkum oru Dayalan kidaippathillaiye
Nalla karuthulla kathai Padmini
Thanks for your comments tt