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That……..dat…actually…you know…Dad said to buy ring for both of you…Each weighing 5grams…I went with my friend Adharv…we saw a ring which was really cute, weighting 7.5gms & decided to go for it…Adharv brainwashed saying groom…. Groom is not your relative why do we have to give him 5 grams…..…so… 

So what? Did you take that for yourself??

No….instead of 5 & 5…We went for 7.5 & 2.5 (KD, enaiyum kothuvittu thiruthirun muzhikiradhai paru, kurangu)

Hahahahah….Jokes apart

Oye, who cracked joke??? See this….This is the ring I got for Satya…

Accepted!! Looks pretty….It would look prettier on your finger…….

C’mon show your finger…..

………………………

Why do you feel so shy??? You look really scary…..please don’t feel shy and scare me like this..ever…..hahaha

Moron….I am angry………How dare you to hold my hands???

Good Question…..Dare to do anything for you, Vids. I mean it. I can’t express it in words……It wasn’t really insulting when Satya said she can’t marry me…..As you said we will realize things only in the neck moment….It was little embarrassing to face the crowd…You know what….

?????????

At that moment I prayed god…to keep me deaf…. How can people talk about someone’s character….Hot blood was gushing through my veins….Teeth biting…We can never change people…..

………………………..

You came in like an angel....Sweet angel…I can say it as Love at first statement seeing your audacity. (I think him meant about her atrocity) I was flattered. Unspoken words speak a lot, Vids… 

Love?? Did bells ring?? Background music’s???

Yes, my first and best love…I am not like you to say…I like to Marry this gentleman…hahha…I love this brave & beautiful lady of my life. I am happy to share the rest of my life with you…. Even if you had not proposed me in front of so many people I would have come in search of my love. I love you Vidya & I mean it from bottom of my heart. 

Jeevan…..I….I…..I think…

No, I am not forcing you to reply. We have our sweet life ahead.. Take your time….

hahahehehe….I…I think you’re really antique Jeeva….

What??

I want to enjoy every moment of my life with you Jeevan. I promise to be with you during all ups and downs of Our life…I promise to make sure you have happy tears everyday by peeling onions….I mean I will peel onions and you chop the onions hahaha to prepare upmaa…..Let our sweet life begin here.........

Hahhaha….I do Vids….Hold this. My first gift for my love.

I don’t want this, Jeevan…(hesitation smiley)

But why??

Mm…You actually got this for Satya right?? I want your first gift to be really special….(adipavi smiley)

So sweet….no this wasn’t for Satya….Actually I never got any gift for her….(Asadu vazhihura smiley)

I will slit your bones if you lie….when did you go and get this gift??? We didn’t have time to have lunch also …and then….

Lecturer madam…..for sure you will slit my bones I guess…hahha…After Arundhathi Nakshathiram…

How???? (thinking smiley)

Amazon.in…..hahahah..It got delivered few hours back & (Wink Smiley)

…..

Vids, hold on…this is for you only dear (Pavam looks no one gave her a gift)….show your right hand…

Your first gift means a lot to me….Fossil??

Yes…you like it??

Of course…very cute...but next time fast track would do…

Okay…Ms Economics…

Jeeva, you’re putting it wrong….

Nope I am right…..Every time you see the time twist your hand…your fist should punch your chest & you will feel me every second….(Love smiley)

How sweet…..but unromantic thought hahah (tongue out smiley)

Pinch me….I’ll punch you

Punch me….I’ll kick you

Kick me…..I’ll slit you

Cool Cool…..Wars but no Bars!! (Happy Smiley)

Talk to me….I’ll sing with you

Sing with me…I’ll spin with you

Spin with me……I’ll Hug you

Hug me….I’ll Kiss you

Kiss me….I’ll show the taste of LOVE. I love you Jeevan.

Thank you all. See you in the next act…

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18 comments

  • Good story Adharv jo........ :clap: <br />Jeevan and Vidya love ok :-) <br />y satya first acepted for the marriage? then stop in between marriage? :Q:
  • Chance illa ma,ippadi yellam write panna unnaladhan mudiyum.paavam Mr.Jeevan,thaali katradhuku munnadhi konjamae konjam thoonkitu iruntha avar braina wake up panni irukalam!enna seiya? Vidhi valiyathu! Adhima mulamaa Vidhya roobhathula vanthu cricket play pannuthu! Ippadi oru wife kidaika avar enna pannaro?godku thaan theriyum...funny as well as groomukum marriage ninu ponal varum depression azagha sollita.bracketla & bold marksla vandha words simply super.<br />Ending lines nalla irunthathu...<br />Let's see ,futurla ennavellam Mrs.Jeevanala Msr.Vidyaku nadaka poothunu avaallaa waiting...super dear.Write more...
  • Thank you, Ma'am. I note your suggestion :thnkx: I will try to avoid it in the next act. Kandipa-van sollamudiyadhu but try panuren :) Still in the learning sphere.
  • Cute story adharv... (y) <br />Gud narration... :roll:<br />Vidhya kku knjam intro kodutharukalam...antha edam mattum lyt a puriyala...<br />Waitin fr ur nxt act...
  • :D thanks for your lovely comment...Kacha kacha-na ma'am :Q: kalyanam nalunale kacha kacha thaa appadi illana entertainment illaye :grin: <br /><br />Yes ma'am amazon deliver paninaga ena konjam selvau achi...Oru thara impress pana idhu kudava panakuadhu adhu :P Naa ellam lorry lorry ya gift varavaippen Ma'am ;-) <br /><br />what is that guys mattum thaa pananuma....Girls rock ma'am :dance: :eek: :eek: Jeevan pattriya confidential matter ippadi leak panitingale facepalm :thnkx:
  • wow Adharv ... herova heroine kapathuvangala . :D <br />.diff concept ... Smiley's nalla irukku .. <br />Vid & jeevan pechu semma :lol: <br />Super story ..pinreenga (y)
  • Very entertaining story Adharv (y)<br /><br />It was a different concept... Poduva marriage anniku etum prachnayaala mrg ninnu pona aangal taan ponnai marriage senjuka mun varuvanga ...itu apdiye uldaa :P<br /><br />But Vidya intro kodutrukalaam...kacha kachaanu ore dialougues ...so first page purinjuka konjam time edutuchu :)<br /><br />Different smileys recommendations smile seyya vachatu...<br /> :cool: <br />Hero kadaisila ivlo romantic aaidaare Amazon la ivlo fast aa delivery kodukirangalaa :Q: anta scene romba pidichatu nice one.<br /><br /><br />Atu sari AIA Jeevan Ku marriage nu sonneenga ...inta hero en kidda ' naan avan illai' nu sollidaare...enna seyalaam ;-)
  • Wowwww super cute story Adharv :clap: <br />Epdi ipdi yosichinga :D Haha tat too vidya avanga kita blessings vaanga sonadhu..hahaha still am laughing :lol: <br />Aniyaayam pa :D <br />But both are lucky :-) <br />Very well written Adharv :-) <br />Guest performance too thandhutinga.. :lol: super ji (y) <br />Looking forward for ur next act ;-)
  • Wow tat was so cooool n lovely.... totally loved the comments within () Ur writing style s awesome Adharv :clap: totally enjoyed.... i was :D :grin: thorughout.. Keep writing more (y)
  • Cute story Adharv.<br /><br />To start with I was slightly distracted by the within '( )' content but got used to it as the story went on :-)<br />Guess that's your signature style (y)<br /><br />Marriages are made in heaven! Jeevan and Vidya's marriage proves it again.<br /><br />But poor Satya :-)

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