(Reading time: 10 - 20 minutes)

She went to the living to watch television, she turned it on, she started thinking about Barath’s cousin, how could a woman be so evil, to attempt to murder her own aunt for the sake of money? OMG this is atrocious, well this is how that woman is, I have to be really careful, the anger will be on me for sure, it’s better to be careful.

At thirty minutes past nine Barath opened the door, came in and ordered for the food, and went to shower, and put all the wash clothes in the laundry bag and kept it aside, and came out with the bath robe on. Barathi saw his look and was shivering but she wanted to be closer to him, He came near her and pulled her closer, she just needed him, he found her lips and closed by his. They heard the bell ring and did not care to move to open the door and the bell continued to ring, he pulled himself and kissed her forehead and said don’t move, I’ll be right back and went to open the door, the dinner was at the door step, he asked him to keep it there and move, once he moved he shut the door and went to his wife, and picked her up from the sofa and went to the dining table, and took the food and fed her, himself.

She said ‘I’ll eat myself Barath,’

‘No, I’ll feed you myself, you were fantastic, Rathi, the kiss was fantabulous, I want it all night the same way, hmm is that a yes?’

'She was really shy, and said hey,you are teasing me,'

'No, not at all, I am not at all teasing, you made my day, the kiss was very fantastic, I want it all night and every day and night the same kiss,'

'So, you have decided to sit home without any other business,'

'Yes, i don't care about anything, if I get your kiss the same way you kissed me now, all my life,' he looked at her, smilingly,

She laughed at him, and saying 'okay now stop looking at me like this, have you finished eating, I am going to close everything now,'

'Oh, are you indicating me that you are ready to go to bed?'

'Ah, what, what did you ask? You said something?could you please repeat it?'

'Hey, nothing........, you are teasing me, you sweet girl......'he came close to her and lifted her and took her to bed and they continued their love.

The next day early morning at four thirty, Barath phone was ringing, he picked up and spoke to Selvam and then woke up, Barathi and told her ' Rathi , I am going to the hospital, mom regained conscious, so, I'll have to see her now, you sleep wake up late, have your breakfast if I don't get back on time, and thanks for last night,I really enjoyed, keep it up,'

Even in her half sleep she was shy, and told him 'come on, you get going now, is this the time we should talk all about this?'

He laughed louder and went to the hospital.

She could not sleep for a while after Barath left and later she did, and woke up at eight and went to take shower and ordered her breakfast. When the doorbell rang she went to open the door and all of a sudden she remembered to see the monitor to check, who is at the door? She saw a woman standing at the door, and tried to recollect the woman who looked very familiar, and she got it, she was Barath's cousin, who was supposed to be a murderer,

She went inside and took her phone and called Barath and told him that his cousin, who tried to kill his mother, is at the door, and she is not going to open the door until he gets here.

He said, ' I'll be right there, and do not open it, I will give you call and check the monitor also, if I am there.'

she hung up the phone and waited for him to get there.

The doorbell kept ringing and she did not open, she saw her breakfast at the door and he was ringing the bell too, the lady was asking something to room service and he was answering something, she did not hear anything what they were talking but could understand that she was asking, Is she there inside, and he was answering that she ordered food just now,

They two heard someone approaching them and turned back, she saw Barath there, ' where have you been Barath?, I am waiting for you,'

He asked ' How did you know, I am here? Who told you ?'

'There is no need for someone to tell me about you, I have eyes all over'

'Is it? Good your eye did not tell you that I am not in the room?'

'No, I thought, even if you are not there, your wife should be here, Is she not here? Come on open the door, let's sit inside and talk eating the breakfast'

9 comments

  • Story Sema fasta move aanathu time ponathe therila <br />Bharath & Rathi cute pair , really made for each other thaan <br />Interestah ponuthu story padika start panni fulla ipa thaan <br />padichi mudichen :) <br />Waiting for ur next story <br />All the best (y)
  • Hi Jansi, <br />Thanks a lot.. I feel sooooo good..your comments are showering flowers on me. Keep reading n commenting on my tamil work too...<br /><br />VJG
  • Divyaa, thanks so much for being there with me throughout complete episodes commenting on every episodes and encouraging me... please continue to give the same the same encouragement for my other work <br />too..<br /><br />VJG
  • Hi Sir, Congratulations on successful completion of your first series. <br /><br />Very lovely ending...you were always up to the point, start-il irundhu end varikum you kept up the temp (y) ...Hero-k speed breaker poda sona ninga kadhaikkum break podama mudichitinga :clap: :clap: Happy for your happy ending.. :yes: :thnkx: :GL: for your future endeavor.
  • Thank you so much for the opportunity given to me to publish my first romantic story in english in Chilzee. ...sorry for not editing properly.<br /><br />Once again thank yourwhole team for encouraging the budding writers like me. .<br /><br />Regards <br />VJG
  • Super story VJG<br />Kaadal mannan Bharat & azagaana Rathi-yin arumaiyaana kaatal kaaviyam enru solla venum.<br /><br />Starting -il avasaramaana tirumanam enratum konjam doubt iruntatu. But, atarkku piragu katai niraiya suspense illaamal iruntaalum kooda neengal elutiya vitam melum vaasika aarvam kodutatu. :clap: <br /><br />Kadaisiyil ellaam subam & Jr. Bharat& Rathi entry vera ...very nice end . (y) <br /><br />Romba rasitu padikumpadi iruntatu. <br />Innum niraiya series eluta vaaltukkal <br /> :GL:

Leave your comment

In reply to Some User

Copyright © 2009 - 2024 Chillzee.in. All Rights Reserved.