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The nurse answered ‘ the relative of this patient was here and told me the doctor is calling me and he said that he will take care till I get back, so I went to see the doctor, but nobody was there, I don’t know which doctor called me,’

Barath understood there is no point in shouting her. This man has played very well. While they were talking, the police arrived there, Barath explained what happened when he went near the door and called the boys, the police asked the boys and they’d explained everything, then the police picked up the knife and put it in a plastic bag, took a statement, and he grabbed the man who came to kill, Barath’s mom, and went away, the whole drama was over then Barath remembered his wife and turned towards her, she was fainted and lied on the floor, where he didn’t notice her, he went near her and called her Rathi… Rathi… she didn’t open her eyes, he immediately called for the doctor, the doctor came there and checked and informed that she fainted of fear of the whole thing and she also have good news and looked at Barath and said yes you are pregnant. He was so happy to hear that, though, he thought of having it after two years, but now he is really happy, the doctor said nothing else to worry. Barath told Selvam to get some juices for both of them, by the time Barathi came to her senses, then he took her inside his mother’s room and his mom was awoken too.

He told his mom to see his wife. She asked for Barathi’s hand ‘ I am really sorry Barathi, I did not know the difference between the glass and the diamond, I was totally blinded by her instructions. I should’ve known my son, I should’ve listened to him. ‘She kept repeating the same back and forth.

Enough mom, keep quiet, I’ve already told you, me or Barathi understood you, so you get better, I will take you to US with me for your further treatment and you can be happy with us.’ She pulled Barathi and asked her if she is still angry on her,

Barathi turned to Barath and then she turned to her mother-in-law, and said ‘look mom, we both love you, you get well soon, we will go to US and get the further treatment and we will live together happily, you know how much Barath was missing you, he shed tears when he think of you, so you have to be with us only, I don’t want to miss you any further. ‘

She cried and told her ‘how much I’d troubled you, you two were separated for more than two years,’

‘No, nothing like that, whatever it is, it’s not going to change that you are our mom right, so do not think about it, think of getting well. I am your daughter from now on… do not think, I am your daughter-in-law.’

Mom was happy to hear it, Barathi’s phone was ringing, she told her mom- in –law that it’s her mom and she picked up the phone, ‘how is Barath’s mom Barathi? Her mom asked her

She said ‘right now we are here, mom has regained conscious, she is doing fine, will have to talk to the doctor for further treatment.’

Barath’s mom asked the phone and she wanted to speak to her mom.

She told her mom that Barath’s mom wanted to speak to her.

She spoke to her mom and apologized for her action towards her daughter, and said that I could have been a better mom, but she is now advising as her own daughter would do, and she also said that, she was blessed to have a daughter like Barathi.

Barathi’s mom was happy and she told just like her ‘we are blessed to have a son like Barath’

Both were happy. They stayed in the hospital, after they talked their mother, doctor came and said that she is doing extremely better, she would be released from the hospital in another few days, but they felt that, it is difficult to travel now, and it may take another one or two months.

He did not say anything, and then he told his mother to rest for a while and put his hand on her hip and pulled her towards him, she showed his mom is here and he should remember, he said in a very low voice, I know but you are more important than anything, why didn’t you tell me?’ he asked her

She asked him back ‘about what?’

‘About your pregnancy,?’

‘what, pregnant, me?’

He said ‘yes, you, I would have been much happier to hear it from you,’

She said ‘I wasn’t aware that I was pregnant, are you sure? Are you happy about it?

He said ‘I am very much happy, this is the proof of our love my darling, I want this child very much, I am so happy, how about you?’

She said ‘if you are happy, me too, I want your child very much to carry and nurture,’

‘hmm, I love the way you say, my sweet heart, I love you so much, I want our child, I want to have now, ‘the way he said that they both lost their senses

He kissed her right there and he was out of control, so as she, mom saw both of them and heard what they were talking and understood that she is going to be a grand mom, she was so happy and closed her eyes and wanted their kids to enjoy their moments and seeking the god’s blessings for her kids and kids to come.

The end!

Episode #11

9 comments

  • Story Sema fasta move aanathu time ponathe therila <br />Bharath & Rathi cute pair , really made for each other thaan <br />Interestah ponuthu story padika start panni fulla ipa thaan <br />padichi mudichen :) <br />Waiting for ur next story <br />All the best (y)
  • Hi Jansi, <br />Thanks a lot.. I feel sooooo good..your comments are showering flowers on me. Keep reading n commenting on my tamil work too...<br /><br />VJG
  • Divyaa, thanks so much for being there with me throughout complete episodes commenting on every episodes and encouraging me... please continue to give the same the same encouragement for my other work <br />too..<br /><br />VJG
  • Hi Sir, Congratulations on successful completion of your first series. <br /><br />Very lovely ending...you were always up to the point, start-il irundhu end varikum you kept up the temp (y) ...Hero-k speed breaker poda sona ninga kadhaikkum break podama mudichitinga :clap: :clap: Happy for your happy ending.. :yes: :thnkx: :GL: for your future endeavor.
  • Thank you so much for the opportunity given to me to publish my first romantic story in english in Chilzee. ...sorry for not editing properly.<br /><br />Once again thank yourwhole team for encouraging the budding writers like me. .<br /><br />Regards <br />VJG
  • Super story VJG<br />Kaadal mannan Bharat & azagaana Rathi-yin arumaiyaana kaatal kaaviyam enru solla venum.<br /><br />Starting -il avasaramaana tirumanam enratum konjam doubt iruntatu. But, atarkku piragu katai niraiya suspense illaamal iruntaalum kooda neengal elutiya vitam melum vaasika aarvam kodutatu. :clap: <br /><br />Kadaisiyil ellaam subam & Jr. Bharat& Rathi entry vera ...very nice end . (y) <br /><br />Romba rasitu padikumpadi iruntatu. <br />Innum niraiya series eluta vaaltukkal <br /> :GL:

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