தொடர்கதை - இதழில் கதை எழுதும் நேரமிது! – 14 - பத்மினி செல்வராஜ்

Hi..mam..i understand de way u bring tis story...pls dont bother wit others..tis is a story not a real life.i hope u will bring it wit happy ending.dhusyan will regret his mistake n be a respect to women n also married wit mani live happily...pls continue writing on ur way n be happy

கதை வித்தியாசமாக உள்ளது. இந்த கதையின் மூலம் எதோ ஒரு படிப்பினை கூற வருகிறீர் என்பது புரிகிறது. அது என்ன என்பது இன்னும் விளங்கவில்லை... சிறந்த மைய கருத்தை எதிர் பார்க்கிறேன்... நன்றி.. all the best

Unga stories ellam ennaku romba pidikum. Ungaloda niraya stories nan padichurukean. Super ah irunthathu. But intha story ah epdi kondu poringa nu puriyala. Dhushyanth character sutthama pidikala. But still i hope neenga intha story ah nalla padiya mudipinga. All the best. Thank you

இதனை பதிவிடும் வரை 448 நபர்கள் தங்களது இவ்வாரக் கதையை படித்து உள்ளனர். எழுத்தின் தாக்கம் தாங்கள் நினைப்பதை விட அதிகம் இருக்கும். என் 10 வயது மகனுக்கு பெண் உடல் பற்றிய புரிதலை சமூக அக்கறை உடன் சொல்லி வளர்க்கும் பொறுப்பான தாயாக இதை பகிர்கிறேன்.தங்கள் நாயகியோ,அவள் தோழியோ ஆண் ஆதரவின்றி வாழ இயலாதா?ஏன் திருமணம் மட்டுமே வாழ்வா?<br />தன்னை இழிவு படுத்திய ஒருவனதுகட்டாய முத்தத்தை தாங்கள் எழுதியது ஏற்க முடியவில்லை. அவ்விடமே கொன்றிருக்க வேண்டாமா என்ற எண்ணமே ஏற்படுகிறது.<br />விமர்சகர்கள் மற்றும் விமர்சனங்கள், ரசனைகள் மாறும்.இருப்பினும் "NO MEANS NO" இல்லையா சகோதரி.<br />But hats off to you for making silent chillzee readers to write long comments..

:Q: neenga kathai kondu pogumvidham dhushyanth,manu thirumanam nadanthu vidumpol thondrugirathu.eagerly waiting 4 next epi. :thnkx: & :GL:

THANK YOU RAMYA. !!

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENTS SIR!! I'M NOT HERE FOR SPOILING OUR SOCIETY. UNDERSTAND THE INTENTION PROPERLY AND SHARE YOUR COMMENTS !!

Ma'am, whatever it is I feel a strong and bold person like manikarnika should not give into the whims and fancies of a rapist like dhushyant.. She should just treat it like an accident.. In fact, there is a friend character in this story who has moved on with her life despite an incident similar to this.. Pls dont show family pressure or pregnancy as a reason for the marriage.. Manikarnika deserves a better and respectful life.. As one of the very few talented women writers, you should not support patriarchy no matter what.. Its true that every story shows a different slice of life and its upto you to take it forward in any way.. But its my opinion and I think many more readers also feel the same way.. All the best..

Thank you all for sharing your concern. Appreciate for sharing negative comments. But you are not getting the intention of this story line..Unlike regular stories, once a girl is raped, she used to cry and closing her world, my heroine is bold enough to face the word. She is bold even to work under the same person who raped her.. my intention is to highlight her boldness and courages..I also highlighted another character Tulasi who overcame this situation and living happy life.. And there are men who support them.. <br />You are not highlighting those good things and pointing only against her marriage whether it is right or wrong which i feel sad on the readers.. THANK YOU!!

Lets not generalize and criticise the writer.. She has written several good stories in the past.. True.. Even I am not for the content and characterisation in this story.. We can always give negative opinion in a respectful way.. Lets not personalise an attack..

Funny parts are dhusyandh mother is pampering him even though she knows that he is a rapist... also manikarnika, such a bold girl working with her rapist also it seems that she is enjoying the ill intent eyes of dhusyandh... controversial story... sorry ma'am... i enjoyed reading all the other stories of urs... but I couldn't accept the way this story is going...

Intha kathasiriyar avarkaluku oru kelvi unka ponna kiduthuta ipadi than mrg panikanum pesitu katha eluthivinkala. Konjam kuda yosika teriyama neenkalam yan intha mathiri elutha varinka. Urpudiya onum panala nalum intha samkatha inum mosamana nilamaiku kondu pokathinka. Mudula nadanthuka mattinkanu ninaikaran.

same opinion in my side too :no:

Exactly Sindhu. Same opinion as you. Rape cannot be justified with marriage.

Good morning padmini sis,<br />So,you are writing an anti hero subject.Very vry hard to accept the subject.As a woman, l never support these kind of anti heroes who always see a woman with ill intent in their eyes always.l request you not to repeat your style of describing a girl's dress and her physique as always a treat to men.lf a girl is bold, eventhough she is ill treated or raped, she can live a life independently, no need to marry a rapist.this is not 1980.we r in a stage to advise our children about sex education. A raped girl is first to be treated with contraceptives .okay as a reader of all chillzee stories, l want to convey my thoughts. Thanks, let's see how your story goes..