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Anyway thx a lot dear. Now I am becoming a successful man because of you only. Thx a lot for everything da...”

“It’s my responsibility Ajay. Nothing big in this. OK? Come… I did sweets...”

“Hmm WHR is Achu?”

“I was telling story ... He just now slept...”

“OK ok Let him sleep. Hey wify, what’s the dinner plan? Shall we go out?”

“Sorry, my dear Ajay,  I have cooked already... shall we go on weekend...”

“What? You did? How you are managing your time? You did these many things by evening itself. You are amazing. I love you, my wify.” – Dad lifted my mom with full of joy.

 I took a nap so don’t know what happened after that.

8 PM - In dinner:

Mom did arrangement of candle light dinner in our garden itself. Really she is yearning for my dad. Here only climax of her b ‘day gift is waiting. So mom is stirred and telling me that “Baby! Dad is coming out of the house with the blindfolded. He will be surprised once he sees this. And more than this, my gift will take him to the seventh heaven.”

 As we were waiting for that moment when mom opened his eyes he was stunned. He even forgot to close his mouth. Mom is kidding him “omg! Ajay you are getting goose bumps. I finally made it. Do you like it, my hubby?”

“Hey! It’s breathtaking darling. Stupendous work! you are not normal wify. You are something special. I am very lucky to get you in my life. Whenever I am with you I am forgetting all my problems. At least for you and Achu I should grow fast. One day I will make you both happy more than this. I owe you that.” His tears are trying to come out. But he managed very well.

“Hey Ajay what's this. Now itself you take care of me like a queen. What else I need. I am so happy with you more than with my parents. Even I want to share some responsibilities with you. Let's talk about that later. Come let's have our dinner.”

They were romancing for some times and they were sharing their old memories. I just tasted the mushroom briyani. It’s yummy! Savory. As usual no one can beat my mom’s preparation. They are having dessert now. With this sweet, my mom is ready to give her 20th surprise gift. I am not going to tell what's that gift is. But accidently dad didn't like that surprise. At least he would have kept silent but it’s ticked him off. He went out of his control. He didn’t know how to handle that. Everything got changed within a min.

“Sorry, Aishu. I don't think it's good now. I am not interested.”

Mom didn't expect this. She started weeping. She simply said “Ajay I thought you will be happy about it but what happened to you? Why you are speaking like this? Please Ajay stop it.”

“How long it is? Why didn't you tell to me in starting? Is this a gift? Do you know our situation? For Achu and you itself I need to earn more. Do you know how hard I am working? At least you know the price of petrol? It's my mistake. Like others I would have asked you also to go to work. Being simply sitting in the house how will you understand my situation? If you understood, you would be discussing with me. How dare you can decide by your own? Without my knowledge how could you let it be? I am asking to you only. Say something. Stop your emotional drama please. Don't irritate me. Let it sort out first. Speak out at least now.”

Even I didn't expect this from him. It's hurting me a lot more than my mom. I couldn't bear it. I can't see her like this. Until now how happy she was. How beauty she was. Now with her crying reddish face. Omg. I want to scold my dad. But mom told me that kids shouldn't involve in parents fighting. They have rights to fight with each other. You may not understand their feelings so without knowing anything shouldn't involve in their fight. Thinking that I just kept quiet.

After few minutes she started to speak “Ajay life is not about money it’s about happiness, about our family, our relationship and our love. Can't you see our happiness with what we are having now? Then why you are saying like this?”

“That’s what I am telling. Because Achu is small now. As he grows, we need more money to bring up him well. Don’t be stupid. Just think practically.”

“I can't take it anymore. Let's speak this about later. I don't want to ruin your birthday. May be you are in some stress now. So have your dessert and go to sleep. I am bouncing. Happy birthday once again. Good night.”

From the moment mom came into the room she is wailing. I don't know what to say. How to say. But mom understood me and told me that “don't worry ammu mummy will handle this. You go to sleep. Tomorrow I will tell you a story OK?” Then I had some milk so slept soon.

Morning I came to know that dad didn't come to room night. Morning also he started to office earlier without having breakfast and taking his lunch. It's been 2 days since they spoke with each other. Mom became worst. She is whimpering all the time. She is not at all having her food properly. Even I had little only. I don't want to see my mom like this. When dad arrives I decided to fight with him.


  • Thanks for your feedback :thnkx: Your question is correct. :clap: But its not early for them. I have mentioned that she had kept this as secret for long time that's why he started scolding her by asking how long its been nu. :yes: and ji neraya peru ipdi tha irukanga whatever whether it is love or arranged. in some cases they cant handle things correctly apo avangaluke antha relation ship mela doubt vanthruthu. :Q: <br /><br /> y I ended like this nu keta positive ah mudicha many ll take it as only story but ithu real time la inum nadanthutu tha iruku atleast padikravanga nama ini ipdi pana kudathunu nenaipangala athuku tha. :grin: <br />come on ji waiting for your story. :GL:
  • she feels happpy about 5yrs of der married life but not worth it ivangaloda understanding level is nil....for which they have to killed a life do they have the right do so???..... 3:) 3:) Even in the present era we have many parents who are dumb like this.... :sad: <br /><br />Over all super attempt waiting for the next story....heroin name-yavdhu vidunga pa ;-) <br /><br />:thnkx: for a meaningful story (y)
  • Ball enga court la pottu ninga enga poninga Lalli ma'am ;-) <br />Excellent yaar well narrated.... :clap: :clap: <br /><br />Ninga enoda adutha kadhai hero peru mattum thaa eduthukittingan ninaichen but konjam konjame konjam enoda theme kuda :D :P Hopefully I get sometime to write and send it ASP. :P <br /> <br /> :hatsoff: for you choice of theme and andha paapa oda unarchigalai rombhave azhaga present seithu irukinga very very cute but adhu varaikumm kuzhandhai pesuvadhu ketta amma why she didn't hear her voice at the end???<br /><br />I certainly don't agree to the decision what the parents have taken....Utter stupidity. It was not too late rendu perum sernthu oru better decision eduthu irukalam... Ivanga oruthara oruthara love panurangala hmmm ok but oruthara oruthar purinjikittu life lead panurangala :Q:
  • Heart touching story mam. Totally different from your previous story. Well narrated, did convey correctly and handled with maturity. <br />MOMs, the salt (basic and necessary ingredient) of real life. Without them, the world would have been become worse and waste. <br />What a great narrating skill you have mam, already have become one of my favourite author. You have just proved that you are not one dimensionsal writer by taking totally different plot and done a great job. <br />Looking forward for your next story and thanks for this lovely story.
  • :cry: <br />Till the end of the story I was expecting smone to save dat fetus... :cry:<br />How selfish & cruel we human beings who can kill their own child<br /><br />Abortion is a crime this shd b stopped
  • Very good story Lalli (y)<br /><br />We (human beings) have become so very selfish in all dimensions!!!<br /><br />It is sad :sad: <br /><br />But very well narrated story. Kudos to you :)
  • Great story :hatsoff: <br />Superb way of narration :hatsoff: wow <br />Yeah as you said money obviously plays a role in one's life but that is not all. Pointing out financial status for the abortion of second baby is actually not right :-| <br />Conversation between the mother n fetus really so cute!!!<br />Wish that these kinda things don't happen :-)<br />Well written ma'am!<br />Best wishes :-)
  • Cute but very sad story . Starting 1 1/2 pages goes well. First itself I guess a baby is narrating and I thought it is first one then only know I thought it is a fetus by the anger of father.Finally proved it is fetus.Read this type of story(I mean here fetus narrating)more but yours touched a lot. The way of narrating the love between her ma and pa and ma and her by the child very cute. Specially feel very emotional between she and her bro. Yeah u r true most of the abortion going like this kind also. I will not blame Ajay he just want to provide everything good to his family.here the mistake is he must to tell this situation before itself to his wife.He must discuss this topic before. And must take precaution . As a mother , her emotions also very clearly u potraying.Because of not well planning one princess become unborn... keep writing and congratulations for this good story :-)

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